Thesis >> Introduction
The following table features the title (Column A) and the sub-headings of the Introduction chapter of a thesis from Mechanical Engineering (Column B). The key terms in the title are coded in different colors. Use the colour palette provided to identify their corresponding sub-headings in Column B (Table of Contents for the Introduction chapter).
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Click on the button ‘Explanation’ to see the answers explained.
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The purpose of an Introduction refers to its communicative function, which is to communicate specific information about the thesis to the reader.
The six communicative purposes of an Introduction
In general, an Introduction has six communicative purposes which together help the reader to understand the background to the study and the motivation for the research.
- To identify the research topic and establish its significance.
- To review and evaluate previous research to identify aspects of the topic that need to be investigated.
- To identify the specific research gap the study aims to address.
- To indicate how the study addresses the research gap being investigated.
- To establish the contribution the research makes to the broader field of study it relates to.
- To signal the organisation of information in the thesis.
Activity 1
The following table presents extracts from the Introduction chapter of a thesis from Mechanical Engineering (Column A). They are not in the same order as in the thesis.
Column B of the table lists options for the six communicative purposes. Read each extract and select one purpose from the six options provided. Each extract only has one correct option.
Column A ( Extracts from Theses) |
Column B ( Communicative Purposes) |
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To identify the research topic and establish its significance. To review and evaluate previous research to identify aspects of the topic that need to be investigated. To identify the specific research gap the study aims to address. To indicate how the study addresses the research gap being investigated. To establish the contribution the research makes to the broader field of study it relates to. To signal the organisation of information in the thesis. From the review of the research on pollutant emissions of hydrogen-enriched flame, this study will examine the effects of LPG-Hydrogen fuel.
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To identify the research topic and establish its significance. To review and evaluate previous research to identify aspects of the topic that need to be investigated. To identify the specific research gap the study aims to address. To indicate how the study addresses the research gap being investigated. To establish the contribution the research makes to the broader field of study it relates to. To signal the organisation of information in the thesis. |
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To identify the research topic and establish its significance. To review and evaluate previous research to identify aspects of the topic that need to be investigated. To identify the specific research gap the study aims to address. To indicate how the study addresses the research gap being investigated. To establish the contribution the research makes to the broader field of study it relates to. To signal the organisation of information in the thesis. |
To identify the research topic and establish its significance. To review and evaluate previous research to identify aspects of the topic that need to be investigated. To identify the specific research gap the study aims to address. To indicate how the study addresses the research gap being investigated. To establish the contribution the research makes to the broader field of study it relates to. To signal the organisation of information in the thesis. |
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To identify the research topic and establish its significance. To review and evaluate previous research to identify aspects of the topic that need to be investigated. To identify the specific research gap the study aims to address. To indicate how the study addresses the research gap being investigated. To establish the contribution the research makes to the broader field of study it relates to. To signal the organisation of information in the thesis. |
To identify the research topic and establish its significance. To review and evaluate previous research to identify aspects of the topic that need to be investigated. To identify the specific research gap the study aims to address. To indicate how the study addresses the research gap being investigated. To establish the contribution the research makes to the broader field of study it relates to. To signal the organisation of information in the thesis. |
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To identify the research topic and establish its significance. To review and evaluate previous research to identify aspects of the topic that need to be investigated. To identify the specific research gap the study aims to address. To indicate how the study addresses the research gap being investigated. To establish the contribution the research makes to the broader field of study it relates to. To signal the organisation of information in the thesis. |
To identify the research topic and establish its significance. To review and evaluate previous research to identify aspects of the topic that need to be investigated. To identify the specific research gap the study aims to address. To indicate how the study addresses the research gap being investigated. To establish the contribution the research makes to the broader field of study it relates to. To signal the organisation of information in the thesis. |
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To identify the research topic and establish its significance. To review and evaluate previous research to identify aspects of the topic that need to be investigated. To identify the specific research gap the study aims to address. To indicate how the study addresses the research gap being investigated. To establish the contribution the research makes to the broader field of study it relates to. To signal the organisation of information in the thesis. Words that highlight organisation of information are in bold.
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To identify the research topic and establish its significance. To review and evaluate previous research to identify aspects of the topic that need to be investigated. To identify the specific research gap the study aims to address. To indicate how the study addresses the research gap being investigated. To establish the contribution the research makes to the broader field of study it relates to. To signal the organisation of information in the thesis. |
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To identify the research topic and establish its significance. To review and evaluate previous research to identify aspects of the topic that need to be investigated. To identify the specific research gap the study aims to address. To indicate how the study addresses the research gap being investigated. To establish the contribution the research makes to the broader field of study it relates to. To signal the organisation of information in the thesis. |
To identify the research topic and establish its significance. To review and evaluate previous research to identify aspects of the topic that need to be investigated. To identify the specific research gap the study aims to address. To indicate how the study addresses the research gap being investigated. To establish the contribution the research makes to the broader field of study it relates to. To signal the organisation of information in the thesis. |
Answer Key
Note: Items in bold and superscript reflect correspondence between columns.
Column A (Extracts from Theses) |
Column B (Communicative Purposes) |
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To review and evaluate previous research to identify aspects of the topic that need to be investigated. |
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To identify the specific research gap the study aims to address. |
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To identify the research topic1 and establish its significance2. Flame microstructure of a flame a particular flame type: inverse diffusion flame (IDF) |
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To indicate how the study addresses the research gap being investigated. |
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To signal the organisation of information in the thesis. |
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To establish the contribution the research makes to the broader field of study it relates to. |
Extracts A-F Adapted from: J. Miao, “Combustion, Thermal and Emission Characteristics of Gas-fired Inverse Diffusion Flames Burning mixed LPG-Hydrogen Fuel”, Ph. D dissertation, Dept. of Mech. Eng., HKPOLYU, Hong Kong, 2015. [Online]. Available: HK PolyU Electronic Theses. |
Moves in an Introduction
An Introduction includes six specific categories of information (also known as communicative ‘moves’), as outlined in Table 1. It should be noted that an Introduction may not include all six moves or present them in the same order as shown in Table 1 below.
Table 1: The six moves in an Introduction and their respective functions.
Move |
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The research topic and its significance |
To introduce the research topic and establish the contextual background and the significance of the topic being investigated. |
Review and evaluation of relevant research |
To create a knowledge base of existing research to situate the current study. |
Research gap |
To identify areas in previous research that have yet to be studied to establish the research gap which the current study addresses. |
Objectives of the study |
To outline what the study intends to achieve |
Contribution of the study |
The theoretical knowledge or practical applications of the research that the study contributes to the field. |
Overview |
An outline of the organisational structure of the theses (what information each chapter will include). |
Table 2: Moves of an Introduction
Click on the number of each move to see the relevant explanation. The number of each explanation corresponds to the number for each move, e.g. Explanation 1 is for Move 1.
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Example Sentences from Engineering theses |
1. The research topic and its significance. |
*Metallic glasses have received a great deal of scientific and technological interest ever since the first successful synthesis of an amorphous phase in the AU-Si system in 1960[1]. Since then, a large variety of metallic glasses have been developed in both metal-metalloid and metal-metal alloy systems. |
2. Review and evaluation of relevant research |
**In the past, collision detection for ellipsoids was usually performed by faceting, and then applying a collision package appropriate to general convex polyhedra, such as GJK [20], I-COLLIDE [9], or V-Clip [43]. A drawback with this approach is that accuracy and efficiency are compromised by polyhedral approximation. |
3. Research gap |
**Regardless of all the advantages and popularity of using quadrics in various applications as we have seen, real-time CCD of quadrics has not been addressed in the literature. Thorough analysis and classification of intersection of general quadrics can be found in classical algebraic geometry e.g. [4, 7, 58] and CAGD [69] […]. These results, however, consider quadrics in the complex (projective, affine or Euclidean) space, and are not applicable to the collision detection problem, for which the analysis must be done in the real affine domain […]. |
4. Objectives of the study |
*** The specific objectives of this study are shown as follows: |
5. The contribution of the study |
**We develop an efficient and robust algebraic or numerical solution that achieves real-time performance. Our algebraic approach leads to accurate solutions to the CCD problem for moving quadric surfaces under rational Euclidean or affine motions. |
6. Overview |
*** This thesis is composed of ten chapters. The present chapter includes the background information, the objectives and the structures of this thesis. |
* Adapted from: C. Yu. “Prediction and Verification of the Glass Forming Ability in Bulk Metallic Glasses – an Atomistic Approach. Ph. D dissertation, Dept. of Mech. and Biomed. Eng., CITYU, Hong Kong, 2014. [Online] Available: CityU Institutional Repository. ** Adapted from: Y.K. Choi. “Collision Detection for Ellipsoids and Other Quadrics”. Ph. D dissertation, Dept. of Comp. Eng., HKU, Hong Kong, 2008. [Online] Available: HKU Electronic Theses. *** Adapted from: L Xu. “Degradation of Refractory Contaminants in Water by Chemical-Free Radicals Generated by Ultrasound and UV Radiation”. Ph. D dissertation, Dept. Civil and Env. Eng., HKPOLYU, Hong Kong, 2014. [Online] Available: HK PolyU Electronic Theses. |
Review and evaluation of relevant research and identification of the research gap: The cyclical nature of Moves 2 and 3
In the Introduction to a thesis which investigates multiple aspects of a research topic, Move 2 (Review and evaluation of relevant research) and Move 3 (Research gap), are repeated for each aspect. The scope of the study is then outlined to show how the research addresses all aspects presented. The objectives of the study are listed, followed by an overview, if present.
This pattern of structural development is outlined below, using an example of a thesis which investigates the combustion, thermal and emission characteristics of a Liquefied Petroleum Gas and Hydrogen fuel mixture for use in an inverse diffusion flame burner.
Move 1: The research topic and its significance |
Aspect 1: Flame types and IDF flame. |
Aspect 2: LPG fuel |
Aspect 3: H2 fuel |
Aspect 4: LPG-H H2 fuel mixture |
Research gap |
Objectives of the study, |
Adapted from: J. Miao, “Combustion, Thermal and Emission Characteristics of Gas-fired Inverse Diffusion Flames Burning mixed LPG-Hydrogen Fuel”, Ph. D dissertation, Dept. of Mech. Eng., HKPOLYU, Hong Kong, 2015. [Online]. Available: HK PolyU Electronic Theses.
Activity 1>> 2
The following extracts have been taken from the Introduction from five Engineering theses. Identify the move included in each extract by inserting a ü in the box for the correct option. Each option should be used only once in this activity.
Click on the ‘Check Answer’ box to see the answer and its explanation.
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Extract A |
Advanced oxidation technologies (AOTs) have attracted considerable interest in wastewater treatment processes, […]. Various AOTs have been proposed and evaluated within the research community, including stand-alone AOTs, such as ozonation (Derco et al. 2013), ultraviolet irradiation (UV) (Chen et al. 2009a), ultrasonic irradiation (US) (Petrier et al. 1996), Fenton process (Chan and Chu 2003), and hybrid AOTs, such as UV/Fenton (Molkenthin et al. 2013), ozone/H2O2 (Molkenthin et al. 2013) and sonophotolytic process (US/UV) (Duran et al. 2013). |
Adapted from: L Xu. “Degradation of Refractory Contaminants in Water by Chemical-Free Radicals Generated by Ultrasound and UV Radiation”. Ph. D dissertation, Dept. Civil and Env. Eng., HKPOLYU, Hong Kong, 2014. [Online] Available: HK PolyU Electronic Theses. |
The research topic and its significance
Review and evaluation of relevant research
Research gap
Objectives of the study
Contribution of the study
Overview
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Extract B |
Model predictive control (MPC) is an advanced method of process control which was proposed in the 1970s. Engineers at Shell Oil developed the MPC technology and applied it in 1973 [1]. Since then, MPC has been widely used in chemical plants and oil refineries [2], including batch reactors, olive oil mills, sugar refineries, among other applications. |
Adapted from: W. Yang. “Robust Model Predictive Control: Matrix Inequality-Based Approaches”. Ph. D dissertation, Dept. of Mech and Biomed. Eng., CITYU, Hong Kong, 2013. [Online] Available: CityU Institutional Repository. |
The research topic and its significance
Review and evaluation of relevant research
Research gap
Objectives of the study
Contribution of the study
Overview
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Extract C |
The next chapter reviews different kinds of computational methods for protein subcellular localization prediction proposed in the past decades and points out the limitations of these approaches. Chapter 3 details the legitimacy of using gene ontology (GO) information for predicting subcellular localization of proteins. In Chapter 4, two predictors, GOASVM and FusionSVM, which are both based on GO information, are proposed for single-location protein subcellular localization. Subsequently, multi-location protein subcellular localization is focused in Chapter 5. […] Next, from the perspectives of mining deeper GO information, two more predictors, namely SS-Loc and HybridGO-Loc, are presented in Chapter 6. […] |
Adapted from: S. Wan, “Protein Sub-cellular Localisation: Gene Ontology Based Machine Learning Approaches”, Ph. D dissertation, Dept. Elect and Inform. Eng., HKPOLYU, Hong Kong, 2014. [Online]. Available: HK Poly U Electronic Theses. |
The research topic and its significance
Review and evaluation of relevant research
Research gap
Objectives of the study
Contribution of the study
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Extract D |
Silica and phosphate glass systems are disadvantageous because of their high phonon energies (≥1100 cm–1), which cause severe non-radiative decays in the majority of potential RE transitions. RE-doped bismuth and gallate oxide glasses with low phonon energy (≤700 cm–1) have been reported [29–33]. However, these glasses suffer from medium mechanical strength and large crystallization tendency, limiting their application in robust device fabrication. […]Thus, the development of robust oxides glasses with sufficiently low phonon energy, favorable chemical stability, and mechanical strength is necessary. |
Adapted from: B. Chen. “Rare Earth Ions Doped Oxide Glass Materials”. Ph. D dissertation, Dept. of Elect. Eng., CITYU, Hong Kong, 2015. [Online] Available: CityU Institutional Repository. |
The research topic and its significance
Review and evaluation of relevant research
Objectives of the study
Contribution of the study
Overview
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Extract E |
Our approach is algebraic, therefore it requires neither geometric approximation of curved boundary surfaces nor discrete sampling of motion time interval, which are the main sources of inefficiency and inaccuracy of the conventional collision detection paradigm. We develop an efficient and robust algebraic or numerical solution that achieves real-time performance. Our algebraic approach leads to accurate solutions to the CCD problem for moving quadric surfaces under rational Euclidean or affine motions. |
Adapted from: Y.K. Choi. “Collision Detection for Ellipsoids and Other Quadrics”. Ph. D dissertation, Dept. of Comp. Eng., HKU, Hong Kong, 2008. [Online] Available: HKU Electronic Theses. |
The research topic and its significance
Review and evaluation of relevant research
Research gap
Objectives of the study
Overview
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Extract F |
The work will combine experimental studies and thermodynamic calculations and attempt to design new types of advanced ultra-high strength steels hardened by nano-precipitates. The main focus of this study is the thermodynamic calculation-aided alloy design, characterization of nanoscale precipitates by high-resolution transmission electron microscopy and atom-probe tomography, and understanding of the co-precipitation mechanism. |
Adapted from: Z. Jiao. “Alloy Design, Characterisation and Mechanical Properties of Advanced Ultra-High Strength Steels Strengthened by Nano-Precipitates”. Ph. D dissertation, Dept. of Mech. and Biomed. Eng., CITYU, Hong Kong, 2013. [Online] Available: CityU Institutional Repository. |
The research topic and its significance
Review and evaluation of relevant research
Research gap
Contribution of the study
Overview
CheckMoves 2 and 3 are often presented cyclically instead of sequentially, particularly when the research examines multiple aspects. The process of reviewing research and identifying the research gap is therefore repeated for each aspect of the research topic before the objectives of the study are presented.
The extract below from the Introduction is from a thesis in Civil and Environmental Engineering, which examines the use of Advanced Oxidation Technologies (AOTs) to degrade organic pollutants identified in a range of aqueous resources. The extract reviews and evaluates two treatment processes to break down endocrine disrupting compounds (EDCs): Conventional processes and Advanced Oxidation Technologies (AOTs) and identifies the specific research gap for each of these aspects.
Using the colour palette provided, highlight sections of the text that correspond to each move in the extract that follows.
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Technical terms are defined in the Introduction chapter to:
- explain terms to readers without discipline-specific knowledge, and
- demonstrate specialist knowledge of the research topic to academics (professors and the supervisor) reviewing the thesis.
A definition includes the following information: The term being defined, the group it belongs to and its specific defining characteristics.
Click on the number in superscript to see its explanation.
Extract A (Definition) |
Endocrine disrupting compounds1 (EDCs) by definition, are exogenous agents2 that interfere with the synthesis, secretion, transport, binding, action, or elimination of natural hormones in the body that are responsible for the maintenance of homeostasis, reproduction, development, and/or behavior3 |
Adapted from: L. Xu. “Degradation of Refractory Contaminants in Water by Chemical-Free Radicals Generated by Ultrasound and UV Radiation”. Ph. D dissertation, Dept. Civil and Env. Eng., HKPOLYU, Hong Kong, 2014. [Online] Available: HK Poly U Electronic Theses. |
In some theses, the Introduction includes a classification of methods or materials. Here is one example of classification.
Click on the number in superscript to see its explanation.
Extract B (Classification) |
Optical amplifiers1 can be classified into rare-earth (RE) doped optical amplifiers (REDOAs), semiconductor optical amplifiers (SOAs), Raman amplifiers and optical parametric amplifiers (OPA) 2. |
Adapted from: B. Chen. “Rare Earth Ions Doped Oxide Glass Materials”. Ph. D dissertation, Dept. of Elect. Eng., CITYU, Hong Kong, 2015. [Online] Available: CityU Institutional Repository. |
Language of comparison and evaluation
As the writer reviews relevant research to present the background to the topic, perspectives, methods or approaches to the topic are often compared and contrasted to show their similarity or differences in terms of these aspects. Research is also evaluated to highlight shortcomings, or what has not been achieved to date, to draw attention to the unsolved research problem.
The following extract from a thesis in Electrical Engineering illustrates these two techniques. In this example, REDOAs are positively compared with SOAs and Raman amplifiers. The negative aspects of SOAs are presented first and later, Raman amplifiers are negatively evaluated.
Click on the numbers in superscript to see their explanation.
Extract C Key: language of comparison evaluative language |
Among these optical amplifiers, rare-earth doped optical amplifiers (REDOA)s are advantageous over1 the semi-conductor optical amplifiers (SOAs) and Raman amplifiers. Compared with REDOA, SOA is disadvantageous2 because it involves the interference between adjacent pulses in the saturation regime as a result of the short gain recovery time. SOAs produce a significant2 pulse-pattern distortion in the output signal at 25 Gbs, whereas no significant3 degradation over 100 Gps has been observed in REDOAs. In addition, the coupling loss between an SOA and an optical fiber is much larger than that between REDOAs and optical fibers. On the other hand, the major drawback of a Raman amplifier compared with an REDOA is its low efficiency.4 Raman amplifiers have relatively poor pumping efficiency at low signal powers resulting in much easier gain clamping4. |
Adapted from: B. Chen. “Rare Earth Ions Doped Oxide Glass Materials”. Ph. D dissertation, Dept. of Elect. Eng., CITYU, Hong Kong, 2015. [Online] Available: CityU Institutional Repository. |
Cohesive devices: Linking devices and given – new information
In order to enhance readability, writers use linking devices and organise information presented into ‘given – new’ structures. These two techniques are illustrated in the following sections.
Linking devices
Linking devices signal the flow of ideas within a text and enable the reader to anticipate the information that follows these expressions.
These devices have specific communicative functions. The following table presents frequently used linking expressions and illustrates their use with examples from Engineering theses. Other expressions with a similar function are also provided.
Table 3: Linking devices | |
Function of linking device |
Example from a thesis |
To compare Examples |
In the GOA database, each AC may be associated with zero, one or more GO terms. Conversely, one GO term may be associated with zero, one, or many different ACs. *** |
To add a comparable point |
Similarly, for the proteins whose top and 2-nd homologs do not have any GO terms, the third-top homolog was used; and so on until all the query proteins can correspond to at least one GO term. *** |
To summarise |
Overall, the regular lattice network has the worst performance among the three due to its long average path distance. ** |
To make one’s argument more specific |
Communication networks are modeled, analyzed and characterized using complex network parameters. In particular, the impact of network topology, routing strategy and resource allocation on the performance of generic communication networks is studied through theoretical analysis and computer simulation. ** |
To provide an example |
For instance, in communication networks which we will discuss in detail in the rest of this thesis, node degree represents the number of physical data transmission connections of a computer/router. ** |
To acknowledge a point and introduce a conflicting or different point |
Although node degree is a simple measure of in a network, it can be very illuminating. ** |
To establish cause and effect |
Consequently, microbubbles containing the vaporized liquid and/or previously dissolved gas will form because of the sufficiently large negative pressures (Adewuyi 2001, Cintas and Luche 1999). *** |
* Adapted from: C. Yu. “Prediction and Verification of the Glass Forming Ability in Bulk Metallic Glasses – an Atomistic Approach. Ph. D dissertation, Dept. of Mech. and Biomed. Eng., CITYU, Hong Kong, 2014. [Online] Available: CityU Institutional Repository. **Adapted from: J. Wu. “Study of Communication Network Performance from A Complex Network Perspective”. Ph. D dissertation, Dept. Elect and Inform. Eng., HKPOLYU, Hong Kong, 2014. [Online]. Available HKPolyU Electronic Theses. ***Adapted from: S. Wan, “Protein Sub-cellular Localisation: Gene Ontology Based Machine Learning Approaches”, Ph. D dissertation, Dept. Elect and Inform. Eng., HKPOLYU, Hong Kong, 2014. [Online]. Available: HK Poly U Electronic Theses. |
* ‘Although’ and ‘However’
These two often-confused linking devices have slightly different functions. ‘Although’ is used to acknowledge a point and present contrasting information. ‘However’ is used to compare or indicate a shift in argument, and present a conflicting viewpoint. The structural pattern used for the two linking devices is different.
Although it was found that the correlation of soil properties generally follows the fractal model in nature (Fenton, 1999b), the finite-scale model is commonly applied in geotechnical analysis (e.g., Lumb 1974, Phoon et al. 2003, Cao 2012).
If the above example is written using ‘however’, the structure will be as follows:
The correlation of soil properties generally follows the fractal model in nature (Fenton, 1999b). However, the finite-scale model is commonly applied in geotechnical analysis (e.g., Lumb 1974, Phoon et al. 2003, Cao 2012).
Given and new information
In any text, known or familiar information is presented first, followed by unknown or new information. This transition from given to new information makes the text more cohesive by linking complex ideas and assisting understanding.
Extract D In the extract, arrows are used to indicate how ‘new’ information becomes the ‘given’ information for the next sentence. The sentences in the extract are numbered. Click on the number to see the annotated explanation. Key: given new linking devices |
1. The spatial correlation between the values of soil properties at different locations is modeled using a correlation function. 2. In general, the correlation function is categorized into the finite-scale model and the fractal model. 3. In the finite-scale model, the correlation dies out rapidly as the separate distance increases to the correlation length while it remains strong over a very large distance for the fractal model (Fenton 1999a, Cao 2012). 4. Although it was found that the correlation of soil properties generally follows the fractal model in nature by Fenton (1999b), the finite-scale model is commonly applied in geotechnical analysis (e.g., Lumb 1974, Phoon et al. 2003, Cao 2012). 5. The major advantages of the finite-scale model are that a single parameter of correlation length can capture the whole information on spatial correlation and little difference arises between these two types of models over a finite domain (Fenton 1999b). |
Adapted from: K. Huang. “Bayesian Inverse Analysis in Geotechnical Site Characterisation”. Ph. D dissertation, Dept. of Civil and Arch. Eng., CITYU Hong Kong, 2014. [Online] Available: CityU Institutional Repository. |
Verb tenses
In the Introduction, a combination of verb tenses is used. These are:
- Present tense
- Present perfect tense
- Present continuous tense
- Past tense
To achieve these functions, a combination of verb tenses is used as illustrated below.
- Present tense
Extract E Steel is by far the most important, multi-functional and most adaptable of structural materials in the engineering industry
Adapted from: J. Jiang. “Plasticity Modeling and Experimental Study of Fiber-enforced Polymer (FRP) –Confined Concrete columns”. Ph. D dissertation, Dept. of Civil and Arch. Eng., CITYU, Hong Kong, 2012. [Online] Available: CityU Institutional Repository.
The present tense is used to refer to a process, a fact or information established as a fact in the field.
- Present perfect tenseThis tense has multiple functions as follows:
Table 4: Present perfect tense Function
Example
To provide information or facts to create a background for the topic
* Simple geometric primitives such as spheres [25], axis-aligned bounding boxes [23, 67], oriented bounding boxes [21], and discrete oriented polytopes [33] have been widely used as bounding volumes for collision detection.
To provide a brief overview of the present state of research
*** The bandwidths of C- and L- bands are no longer sufficient to meet the current daily data transmission requirements. To extend the optical bandwidth beyond these two regions, new optical amplifications have been proposed using […].
To provide a general summary of main trends without identifying a particular article.
** Such uncertainties existing in site characterization data have not been accounted for in traditional geotechnical site characterization, which has been mainly deterministic.
*Adapted from: Y.K. Choi. “Collision Detection for Ellipsoids and Other Quadrics”. Ph. D dissertation, Dept. of Comp. Eng., HKU, Hong Kong, 2008. [Online]. Available: HKU Electronic Theses.
** Adapted from: K. Huang. “Bayesian Inverse Analysis in Geotechnical Site Characterisation”. Ph. D dissertation, Dept. of Civil and Arch. Eng., CITYU Hong Kong, 2014. [Online] Available: CityU Institutional Repository.
*** Adapted from: B. Chen. “Rare Earth Ions Doped Oxide Glass Materials”. Ph. D dissertation, Dept. of Elect. Eng., City U, Hong Kong, 2015. [Online] Available: CityU Institutional Repository.
The present perfect tense (has/have + ed) is used to summarise or make general statements about relevant research or trends, without specifying a time period.
- Present continuous tense
Extract F High-tensile steels are rapidly gaining favor with designers in the aerospace, military and other high-tech industries that are challenged to meet higher performance expectations and stringent regulatory requirements at lowest life-cycle cost.
Adapted from: J. Jiang. “Plasticity Modeling and Experimental Study of Fiber-enforced Polymer (FRP) –Confined Concrete columns”. Ph. D dissertation, Dept. of Civil and Arch. Eng., CITYU, Hong Kong, 2012. [Online] Available: CityU Institutional Repository.
The present continuous tense is used to refer to a currently developing, ongoing situation or statements that have current relevance (i.e. important now), where the emphasis is on the present time. It is different from the present perfect tense which details an unspecified period of time.
- Past tense
Extract G In the early years of solid-state lasers and optical amplifiers, RE doped-crystalline hosts were used to fabricate laser devices, e.g. RE-doped LiNbO3, aluminates and fluoride crystals [13-16].
Adapted from: B. Chen. “Rare Earth Ions Doped Oxide Glass Materials”. Ph. D dissertation, Dept. of Elect. Eng., City U, Hong Kong, 2015. [Online] Available: CityU Institutional Repository.
The past tense is used to refer to outcomes of previous research or finished events within a specific time period.
Activity 1>> 2>> 3
The following extract is from the Introduction of a Computer Science thesis. Using the colour palette provided, identify the following language features in the extracts.
Click on the ‘Check Answer’ button after the extract to see the answer.
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- Language of definition
- Language of comparison and contrast
- Evaluative language
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Evaluative language |
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Evaluative language |
The following extract is from the Introduction of an Electrical Engineering thesis. A number of linking expressions have been deleted from it.
From the options provided, select the most appropriate one to fill each blank space in the text.
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1.1.4 Challenges of rare earth ions doped optical amplifiers covering the expanded optical fiber low-loss window Increasing demand in network traffic stimulates the development of optical communication systems with broad bandwidth that is beyond the C-band [51]. The significant improvement in the manufacturing of silica glass fibers has resulted in reduced attenuation caused by hydroxyl (OH–) absorption to a promising degree (~0.3 dB/Km) [52]. 1. Additionally1, the wavelength region from 1200 nm to 1700 nm has become a potential signal band to further enlarge the transmission capacity of current optical networks […]. Optical signal amplifications have been proven in Tm 3+_ doped fluoride-based fiber amplifiers (TDFA) and Pr 3+_ doped fluoride-based fiber amplifiers (PDFA) in ZBLAN and chalcogenide glass fibers for the S- and O-bands, respectively, and 1.2 μm lasers have also been reported in Ho3+-doped ZBLAN fibers [53–55]. 2. However2, the gain spectra of the separate optical amplification bands provided by the RE ions hardly exceed ~100 nm. 3. Thus3, the use of single rare earth ions doped optical amplifiers (REDOA) to develop broadband optical amplifier to cover the expanded optical fiber low-loss window remains challenging. The important emissions of Ho3+ (1.2 μm), Pr3+ (1.3 µm), and Tm3+ (1.4 µm) are very sensitive to the host materials 4. because of4 the very small energy gaps. Studies on these fiber amplifiers have therefore focused on sulfide, chalcogenide, and fluoride glasses [56–58]. 5. Although5 these non-oxide glasses have ultra-low phonon energies that can reduce the multi-phonon relaxation (MPR), their long-term chemical stability and high toxicity limit the practical application of these devices. Silicate, phosphate, and borate glasses are stable materials and widely used in the optical fiber industry. |
Adapted from: B. Chen, “Rare Earth Ions Doped Oxide Glass Materials”, Ph. D dissertation, Dept. of Elect. Eng., City U, Hong Kong, 2015. [Online]. Available: City U. |
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their potential adverse effects EDCs organic contaminants is sewage effluent from both domestic and industrial facilities EDC contamination |
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In recent years, various kinds of organic pollutants1, (1) natural or synthetic, have been identified in surface water, groundwater, and other aqueous resources.2 Some of these (2) organic contaminants3 can mimic natural hormones in the endocrine systems of animals, which are now collectively known as endocrine disrupting compounds (EDCs)4 (Snyder et al. 2003). By definition, the (3) EDCs5 are “exogenous agents that interfere with the synthesis, secretion, transport, binding, action, or elimination of natural hormones in the body that are responsible for the maintenance of homeostasis, reproduction, development, and/or behavior”6 (U.S. Environmental Protection Agency 1997). The major source of surface water contamination with EDCs7 (4) is sewage effluent from both domestic and industrial facilities8 (Gultekin and Ince 2007). Increasing attention has been paid to (5) EDC contamination9 because of its potential adverse effects on environment and human health via drinking water and/or cyclic processes of bio-transformation and bio-concentration.10 |
Adapted from: L. Xu. “Degradation of Refractory Contaminants in Water by Chemical-Free Radicals Generated by Ultrasound and UV Radiation”. Ph. D dissertation, Dept. Civil and Env. Eng., HKPOLYU, Hong Kong, 2014. [Online] Available: HK Poly U Electronic Theses. |
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